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let us recall  the best effects of style
when those who listen know how best to hear
and do not injure those who hold most dear
the hidden blessings of the final mile
rather they wish the urgent to beguile
expecting that the best might engineer
sounds that will please the most discerning ear
and lead once drooping eyes to shine and smile
the age of wonder has no fixed return
but comes upon us as we seem to find
not a changed world but a remarked abode
the home that we have loved for which we yearn
that seemed so hidden for time out of mind
appear before us as we climb the road


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Given 2013-11-12
as we climb the road by *FledgistThe rhyme scheme is a refreshing take on how to rhyme and the message the poet sends bleeds through beautifully in every single line. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by GrimFace242 )

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Fledgist Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for all the faves.  I am most touched.
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JoshuaPatrickLee Nov 14, 2013
Beautiful. 
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TheGalleryOfEve Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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Blueeyes0001 Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
well done! Congrats on the DD!
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mizzmint Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on having your piece featured as one of today's Daily Deviations! :heart:
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LostGryphin Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD
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lintu47 Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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robson666 Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist
congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation  Clap
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here dailylitdeviations.deviantart.…
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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Fledgist Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks to all!
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