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as we climb the road

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November 12, 2013
as we climb the road by *FledgistThe rhyme scheme is a refreshing take on how to rhyme and the message the poet sends bleeds through beautifully in every single line.
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let us recall  the best effects of style
when those who listen know how best to hear
and do not injure those who hold most dear
the hidden blessings of the final mile
rather they wish the urgent to beguile
expecting that the best might engineer
sounds that will please the most discerning ear
and lead once drooping eyes to shine and smile
the age of wonder has no fixed return
but comes upon us as we seem to find
not a changed world but a remarked abode
the home that we have loved for which we yearn
that seemed so hidden for time out of mind
appear before us as we climb the road


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Thanks for all the faves.  I am most touched.